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This semester I learned to consider my audience when choosing writing topics. I now realize that in order for any given instructor to competently grade a paper accurately the topic must not alienate the instructor. Moreover it’s best to choose a topic that interests the grader or rather a topic in which the grader is sympathetic too.

1. What I’ve developed and enjoyed from this class, interims of writing style and form would include voice, cohesion, transitions and different communication styles and structures. One aspect I enjoyed was word play or intended meanings. As well as incorporating complex structures into the direction of my papers. Basically each of my papers resembles some linier direction with specific emphasis on dramatic event and word play to paint a picture only visible through study. The paper which resembles this structure most predominantly was the paper on my son’s birth. I structured within that paper, rolling ebbs and flows similar to child birth. Additionally, I included language which drew lines of panic, humility, fear and chaos. These lines dramatically resemble what is in store for all new parents and the demands to evolve ones character and perspective for the wellbeing of your off spring. Ultimately the paper characterizes a coming of age or rather a transition from self interest to selflessness.         
2. What I find interesting is the complexity of word usage and how if structured intentionally a picture can be painted through intensity and voice resembling something similar to topography. For instance if I say, ”To enjoy life one must consider all possible outcomes and plan accordingly” and then I say in another way, “Life is a blast because its full of possibility; the best part, is figuring out what path to take.” The intended voice comparison is flat verses enthusiastically vibrant. If you consider the strength of each word and its implied meaning while considering the writers intent you can visualize the first being flat and the second as rolling hills. This aspect of writing I find fascinating. I hope to one day create a waltz in which readers can dance and play.